Noelle’s Reviews > Shameless Wonders > Status Update

Interesting to a point. I've gotten to the point that I need to continue to the end. I need to know who will do what and where and why..... Hopefully all the answers will fall into place.

Still reading ... The dialogues still seem a little to stiff, too formal for my liking. Tough story to describe so far.

Still fighting .... at least now they are out of Eln-Radah, the underground lost city of Elves .... still not sure of how I feel about it ... The dialogues still seem somewhat rigid.