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Sarah
Sarah is on page 40 of 294
Why is Sadie and her family claiming something is wrong with the mother? Absolutely nothing she's done so far has warranted the treatment she's getting from her controlling husband and self absorbed children.
Feb 09, 2018 01:39PM
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Sarah
Sarah is on page 45 of 294
The "villain" of this story is supposedly the brother of Sadie, Jackson. And I get that the author wants us to believe that he's overly harsh with Sadie but I've not seen that at all yet..is this just me? What did I miss?
Feb 09, 2018 01:41PM
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Sarah
Sarah is on page 70 of 294
Writing is strange. I don't follow parts of the story with strange words added to sentences and sentences that make little sense to begin with. Almost feels like the author is trying too hard to sound witty that the meaning gets lost.
Feb 09, 2018 01:36PM
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