Michelle’s Reviews > A Brother At My Back > Status Update
Michelle
is 15% done
Language is starting to be a problem for me. I understand that his a Kiwi and some of will creep in but somehow it's disrupting the flow even when his not in the scene as it were.
— Feb 25, 2018 05:36AM
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Michelle
is 98% done
This was a sly through for me. I didn't connect with the characters. Their story wasn't the problem just the way they were written didn't connect. Some of it is language/slang and some of it was just the edit. Anyway it just a so so read for me
— Feb 26, 2018 07:53AM
