Aust*’s Reviews > Un Lun Dun > Status Update

It needs so much editing. And I still don't see where this story is going now I'm already into 80 pages. I'm starting to lose my patience.

It seriously needs a lot of editing for the beginning chapters. The pace is so slow; so many words and paragraphs and incidents unnecessary; and so many places where actions and things need more descriptions. Thoughts up till now: I don't know if I want to finish this. It's so boring me.