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This is pretty much a 50 shades of grey rewrite (minus the kinky fuckery). Or the other way around. Not sure I'm feeling the bazillion perspective changes.
Aug 08, 2012 06:00AM
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Julianne has got to be the dumbest most naive character I have ever read about. The guy kisses her and licks her fingers off and she still manages to believe he wants to be just friends with her. *Banging my head against the wall*.
Aug 10, 2012 07:07PM
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A girl that is apalled to hear a grown man has sex doesnt use the word 'dick'. She just doesn't. Character fail.
Aug 09, 2012 08:18PM
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