Laura’s Reviews > Strange Practice > Status Update

The author is doing that thing where she adds in a lot of hesitating and uncertain words to sentences where they are not needed, and it's driving me crazy. Lots of "apparently"s tacked on for no reason, and a great sentence of defiance ruined by adding "if she could help it" on the end. This book is pitting a fantastic plot and characters against weak writing crutches, and I fear the outcome.