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Bookreader87(Amanda)
is 65% done
There is so much going on:
-The growing relationship between the MCs (which is not done very well)
-Harry's neglectful relationship with his daughter (girl just wants her dad's attention)
-The construction of Harry's new company
-Harry's old business partner messing with him
-Harry and his family being watched
-Harry suffering form PTSD
and yet the author manages to make none of it all that interesting.
— Apr 04, 2018 12:17PM
-The growing relationship between the MCs (which is not done very well)
-Harry's neglectful relationship with his daughter (girl just wants her dad's attention)
-The construction of Harry's new company
-Harry's old business partner messing with him
-Harry and his family being watched
-Harry suffering form PTSD
and yet the author manages to make none of it all that interesting.
Bookreader87(Amanda)
is on page 20 of 250
Have to admit, it bothers me a bit, that the 2 guys in the book do not match the guys on the cover.
— Apr 03, 2018 02:26PM

