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Jo
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I'm really not a fan of the writing style. It feels a bit too false and doesn't seem to match the 16/17 year old girl voice we're working with. I'm enjoying the story but we'll see what happens.
— Apr 11, 2018 04:58AM
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Jo
is on page 151 of 290
Well, it got better. Lots of drama, lots of big plot points, lots of fun to read. However, let’s stop throwing in kisses and sexual tension just for the sake of it, can we stop doing that?
— Apr 12, 2018 12:05AM
Jo
is on page 71 of 290
This is getting a lot more interesting and the writing style a lot more tolerable. A very quick read so far!
— Apr 11, 2018 06:38AM
