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This writing is getting on my nerves… The pair of detectives, our MCs, are at the morgue to inquire about a dead man:
“He led them towards the body of Chris Henway. It was almost impossible to recognize him as the man they’d seen in pictures. His skin was almost white, everything looking dull and dead…”
Duh, he is a f*cking corpse!
— Apr 16, 2018 03:29PM
“He led them towards the body of Chris Henway. It was almost impossible to recognize him as the man they’d seen in pictures. His skin was almost white, everything looking dull and dead…”
Duh, he is a f*cking corpse!
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It seems we don’t have the brightest pair of detectives as MCs in this one…
“Cause of death is blood loss caused by a shot penetrating the right side of the liver. The bullet nicked the inferior vena cava causing the blood loss.”
“Do sink beneath your level of intelligence and explain that to us mere mortals, please.”
What sort of an idiot can’t understand what the doctor said? This guy is a homicide detective?
— Apr 16, 2018 03:33PM
“Cause of death is blood loss caused by a shot penetrating the right side of the liver. The bullet nicked the inferior vena cava causing the blood loss.”
“Do sink beneath your level of intelligence and explain that to us mere mortals, please.”
What sort of an idiot can’t understand what the doctor said? This guy is a homicide detective?
