Briony Appleton’s Reviews > Halayda > Status Update

Loving the plot but could have done with another draft to really tidy and tighten up the writing style and fix some plot discrepancies. It’s *very* obvious that our protagonist’s mixed human-fae heritage was added in a later draft.

Loving the plot but could have done with another draft to really tidy and tighten up the writing style and fix some plot discrepancies. It’s *very* obvious that our protagonist’s mixed human-fae heritage was added in a later draft.