Searcy’s Reviews > Forbidden Hybrid > Status Update

GAH... hold it together and don't give these idiots more ammunition Maeve! Why'd you say something about Gabe? *sigh*

Argh! See, I *told* you you were being stupid! It was so damn obvious!

Uh...nope that is not the right word choice. "Woe to any..." maybe? Loathe is not right.

Wow...I must be invested in these characters, because I can't recall being this on edge with a book in a while. The tension is killing me!

No, bad bad idea! Because who knows who will get their hands on that blood sample! That's like waving a huge red flag and saying "Yoohoo, over here baddies, the hybrid is right over here. Come and get her!"

A little heavy-handed...

“None of these goons will even realise they’ve been compromised. You see, intelligence agencies work with program manufacturers to build backdoors without consumers being the wiser – this way Uncle Sam can keep an eye on everyone. My latest tech can find these backdoors and hijack each program without leaving so much as a footprint on the source code.”

Wow, that is the most ridiculously selfish way I have ever heard to tell someone they are back from the dead. Harsh!

Uh... when did that occur? I only read about some body rubbing and orgasms, along with biting and kissing. Don't recall any oral anything before they passed out. I am guessing this was something from an earlier draft, before either something was removed or rearranged. But that makes it a continuity issue now.

Definitely Urban Fantasy here (along with paranormal RH).

Uh...exactly how is 6 hours enough time for the stench of putrefaction to occur on a body?!