Elithanathile’s Reviews > Finding Their Way > Status Update
Elithanathile
is 80% done
// Uhhhh what?!!? The thing I am NOT crazy about when it comes to this author is her throwing over-the-top drama into the story when we're already winding down toward an HEA!! Granted this drama doesn't include the MCs directly, but still!! I mean, there was enough angst to deal with throughout the book, WHY add more?!!? Sometimes this author just doesn't know when to stop the angst in the realm of good taste!!
— May 06, 2018 03:34AM
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Elithanathile
is finished
// ADORED, ADORED, ADORED this book <33333!!!!!!
Also, I REALLY liked the closure Riley finally got with his dad; it was handled VERY elegantly and VERY well :-)!!
Excellent book <333!!
— May 06, 2018 10:00AM
Also, I REALLY liked the closure Riley finally got with his dad; it was handled VERY elegantly and VERY well :-)!!
Excellent book <333!!
Elithanathile
is 83% done
// Okay never mind, at least the hurricane door is locked tight and he can’t actually get in!! But still!!!! Lock the door and call the cops!! You’re an intelligent guy, Riley, do it!!
— May 06, 2018 04:10AM
Elithanathile
is 83% done
// OMG WHAT THE FUCK?!!? You just became the stereotypical bimbo idiot in a horror movie who runs naked up the stairs, instead of out the front door!! In this case, I can’t believe you fucking opened the front door!! Brett shows up out of nowhere and tricks you into opening the door for him?!!? HE ALMOST RAPED YOU for fuck’s sake, when are you going to fucking understand he is DANGEROUS!!! Shit for brains, Riley!!
— May 06, 2018 04:08AM
Elithanathile
is 82% done
// Thing is, this sounds BELIEVABLE!! I get why the author is doing this here; it’s organic and it’s necessary in order to close out all the lose ends!! This additional “angst” doesn’t bother me AT ALL right now :-)!!
— May 06, 2018 04:03AM
Elithanathile
is 80% done
// “Yes, Lenny had been hurt badly. Yes, he needed support. But for Boxer to drop everything, including a still-forming relationship with Riley, to blow money on a last-minute, one-way flight to Florida was slightly past his realm of comprehension.”
~ I am TOTALLY with you, Riley!! Something tells me something will happen with Brett, and your “father” will help you!! Speculation!!
— May 06, 2018 03:48AM
~ I am TOTALLY with you, Riley!! Something tells me something will happen with Brett, and your “father” will help you!! Speculation!!
Elithanathile
is 80% done
// But I am very intrigued to see where the author takes this!! Don't let me down, Ms. Arthur!! I'm counting on you to bring this baby [i.e. the book] home!! Let's get a home-run here :-)!!
— May 06, 2018 03:41AM
Elithanathile
is 80% done
// It better not be over the top bullshit that kills the happy-happy vibe >:-o!!!!
— May 06, 2018 03:34AM
Elithanathile
is 76% done
// “Boxer caught Riley’s mouth in a long kiss. His emotions were too shredded from the funeral and Hawk’s visit, so his cock stayed out of the game, but he didn’t care. It wasn’t always about sex.”
~ ADORE ADORE ADORE the realness of this moment 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍!!
— May 06, 2018 03:22AM
~ ADORE ADORE ADORE the realness of this moment 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍!!
Elithanathile
is 75% done
Ummm okay I didn't like the fact that you had to tell Hawkeye that [*snorts and rolls eyes at the name*]!! That was NONE of his business and wasn't proving ANY point, other than to what!? What point were you trying to make!? Not cool!!
*** Cools down a bit :-P ... ***
Actually, it WAS pretty cool & great - LOL!! The point was for him to shove the stigmas and stereotypes up his own ass, and go fuck himself!!
— May 06, 2018 03:16AM
*** Cools down a bit :-P ... ***
Actually, it WAS pretty cool & great - LOL!! The point was for him to shove the stigmas and stereotypes up his own ass, and go fuck himself!!

