Michael’s Reviews > Trapped > Status Update

Not bad so far, but the utter lack of separation between individuals' parts in the tale is teeth-splinteringly irritating. Reading for the past half-hour, check. 27 minutes to go in chapter, check. Fourth visit to this 1\3 (or is it 1\4?) Of the tale this chapter, check. Without a lick of warning?

Check and check and check and check. Times three (or is it four?).