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Jan Bedol
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The dialogue is wooden and predictable. Right now I'm bogged down in yet another family argument over which daughter is more beautiful. Not sure I'll stick with it. The historical aspect is intriguing, but so far not developed. I expect I could find a much better fictional treatment.
May 23, 2018 08:33PM
Last Train to Istanbul

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