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May 26 I wish the writing had more detail and dialogue. I've mostly come around on the Ida character. I just wish the story had more meat to it.
— May 26, 2018 09:14PM
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May 27 I would've like a more conclusive ending, and I expected so much more. It was really basic and barely had a plot.
— May 27, 2018 09:58AM
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May 25 Not really bad, but Ida's character is too much. She isn't charming in the slightest and she's just outlandish and her behavior is appalling. I fear what her future is with the dad. There's been a few funny lines but I hope for a lot more humor and for something interesting to happen.
— May 25, 2018 07:38PM
