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I did not like how the story was written in third person. I felt it took away from the story. I couldn’t connect 100% with any one character.
The main character seemed dull, “She was too clean, too clinical. She didn’t know how to get down and dirty and have some damn fun.”
She is 28 and has a major stick up her ass.
The more I kept reading the less and less I wanted to. I can’t believe how bad this was.
— May 30, 2018 12:16PM
The main character seemed dull, “She was too clean, too clinical. She didn’t know how to get down and dirty and have some damn fun.”
She is 28 and has a major stick up her ass.
The more I kept reading the less and less I wanted to. I can’t believe how bad this was.
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