Bunny McFoo’s Reviews > Heart of Obsidian > Status Update
Bunny McFoo
is 72% done
Noooooo, why does it suck now?
WHY? The first third was so good! Kaleb has always been one of my favorite things in the series and now he's just *boring*. WHY DOES THE AUTHOR CONSISTENTLY RUIN HER BEST CHARACTERS???
(Except Judd. Somehow he escaped this fate and I'm grateful)
— Jun 01, 2018 02:17AM
WHY? The first third was so good! Kaleb has always been one of my favorite things in the series and now he's just *boring*. WHY DOES THE AUTHOR CONSISTENTLY RUIN HER BEST CHARACTERS???
(Except Judd. Somehow he escaped this fate and I'm grateful)
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Bunny McFoo
is 54% done
"A second finger, and then all at once she'd had enough, her womb contracting with an emptiness that hurt."
SERIOUSLY, THAT IS THE OPPOSITE OF SEXY. D: D:
— Jun 01, 2018 01:32AM
SERIOUSLY, THAT IS THE OPPOSITE OF SEXY. D: D:
Bunny McFoo
is 53% done
Look, purple prose is all well and good, but if your "womb clenched" during sex a) OW, that's called a cramp & b) NOT HOT.
— Jun 01, 2018 01:28AM
