Patrice Leonard’s Reviews > The Mason Jar > Status Update

Oh, Mason. I still don't like you very much...a 42 year old man acting like a horrible, little brat. Ugh.

So, Mason is still a dick. And if you're going to reference and use the name of a very famous person in your story authors...at least spell their name correctly, ok? It's Gordon RamsAy. NOT RamsEy. Got it?
This book is really bugging the crap out of me. Can you tell?

Not for nothing, but it's getting pretty old really fast that every other sentence of Mason's "inner dialog" is calling Rian an egotistical ass in some way or another. Honestly...Rian has done absolutely NOTHING that would cause Mason to pass this kind of judgement. At. All. So...I'm thinking if Mason doesn't stop being a complete dick, I may not finish this one.