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Olivia
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Plenty of information but story quality, readability still no better.
Only the locations keep it alive.
— Jul 05, 2018 04:52AM
Only the locations keep it alive.
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Olivia
is on page 70 of 368
hmmmve. hard going. Listy, boysy, equipment, gear, fine tuning of diving...lists....with the narrative stilted. The potential should have me turning the pages, instead I keep falling asleep.
— Jul 04, 2018 01:30AM
Olivia
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Hmm...potentially, should be 'grabbing me'...in fact, it is v. hard going. 'boysy' lists of diving equipment and fine tuning dives...with a stilted feel to the telling of the 'story' which IS in there someplace, but listy, listy, listy.
— Jul 04, 2018 01:28AM
