Ashley N.’s Reviews > What Happens In Vegas...After Dark > Status Update
Ashley N.
is 74% done
Third story, liked the witch/vampire mythology, but too many plot holes. Wasn't feeling their chemistry.
— Sep 16, 2012 09:47AM
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Ashley N.
is 52% done
Story 2: decent mythology-modern day witches. Felt rushed to the ending, no plot resolution.
— Sep 15, 2012 06:18AM
Ashley N.
is 28% done
Finished 1st of 4 short stories. Demon mythology was jumbled, characters were underdeveloped, & the sex felt gratuitous, not sexy. Hope I'll like the next story more.
— Sep 10, 2012 05:27PM
