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There's a lot of freezing going on that's got nothing to do with tue cold...
I'm struggling with the writing. It seems, though Felix tells the story, he keeps narrating events fron different perspectives,repetitive different.
— Jul 11, 2018 12:43PM
I'm struggling with the writing. It seems, though Felix tells the story, he keeps narrating events fron different perspectives,repetitive different.
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So, I kind of couldn't deal with all the "freezing". And, to me, it seemed unedited because of weird repetition. And sometimes I couldn't quite follow. But I think the basic idea was very well realized. And even though the entire book was only a few hours, I believe in the future!
— Jul 14, 2018 09:12AM
