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A.V. Shener
A.V. Shener is 50% done
Oh my, there are no real characters in this book.
I mean, there are so many of them, so they all act pretty much the same.
The two main gay characters are embarrassing, seriously.

It's clear that the author is influenced by Steven King, but King knows how to write characters, not just names on paper.

It's shaping up to be a 3.5 stars books, and that's a shame.
Jul 22, 2018 09:34AM
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A.V. Shener is 15% done
I like the book so far, especially the pacing. However, I'm not sold about the writing. Something just feel childish about some sentences. Also, why switching between pov's at the same chapter? It's so annoying. Who does that?
Jul 09, 2018 06:24PM
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