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I love the realism of Will and Lucy's relationship. I'm also very curious to see what this tension springs from. Also very excited to see Katie paired up with Tristan. Having Lucy as their mentor will be very interesting, as well.
Loving this story!
— Aug 01, 2018 12:45PM
Loving this story!
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Literary
is on page 141 of 438
I was REALLY jarred out of this chapter from the reveal of Katie's dad's true colors. I also feel like some of the info shared would have been REALLY nice to know earlier on, for the sake of building up to this explosion.
"OMG" should've been replaced with "oh my god". Alli and Katie both do this, and it mixes up the voices in my head. Also caught a few syntax errors.
Enjoyed the bonding with Katie and Tristan.
— Aug 04, 2018 05:39PM
"OMG" should've been replaced with "oh my god". Alli and Katie both do this, and it mixes up the voices in my head. Also caught a few syntax errors.
Enjoyed the bonding with Katie and Tristan.
Literary
is on page 96 of 438
Really enjoying the gradual journey into this "parallel world". Very interesting character development. I'm beginning to see Katie's alleged selfishness, and I'm really enjoying that Tristan is one of the few who doesn't give her what she wants, when she wants it. They're both very bullheaded and I like that. There's a few inconsistencies, but I'm saving that for my full review. Loved this chapter!
— Aug 04, 2018 01:03PM
