Lukasz’s Reviews > The Game Bird > Status Update

Lukasz
Lukasz is 64% done
There are Pov issues, dialogue feels off a bit, and the pacing is uneven. I can't say I really enjoy it.
— Aug 01, 2018 01:18PM
The Game Bird

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Lukasz is 28% done
Decent, and so far nothing more.
— Jul 31, 2018 01:27PM
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