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kimberly_rose
kimberly_rose is 65% done
It's deteriorated from fun and likeable to "why are these ppl so oblivious"? It's obvious the one character is pregnant and NO ONE suspects. It's obvious the girl and guy like each other, but she resists because blahblahweakassreason-Iam-utterly-unconvinced. I don't get why the male mc likes her, and the plot is so predictable with nothing quirky to save it from boredom.
Aug 09, 2018 09:23AM
Confessions of a Carpool Captive

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kimberly_rose
kimberly_rose is 35% done
This is fun and likeable. Well, I like everyone except the mc, who, unfortunately, is 1stp pov. Give me the gal who unapologetically loves and eats cake (mc from Crazy In Love at the LHBS--ADORE her). This gal, she is forever taking one bite and then not finishing. God, eat something and fucking enjoy it! I feel as if the author is glorifying ppl who "simply can't eat when they're upset." *said with an eye roll*
Aug 09, 2018 08:22AM
Confessions of a Carpool Captive


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