Elithanathile’s Reviews > Ashes > Status Update

// Very sweet book!!

// Wow, Kris’s ridiculously dramatic reaction really disappointed me!!! WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK?!!?

// Oh come on now, Kris had no right to consider putting Remi on the spot; especially after he agreed Remi has the right to take all the time he needed to come out of the closet!! Remi wasn’t saying he wouldn’t support him 100%!! I don’t feel - AT ALL - that Remi should feel bad and I’m sure Kris would agree; Kris is just scared and lashing out!! Poor guys ... both of them!!

// Also, I bet the arsonist was either PJ himself or Travis!!!! I bet you a box of Moonshine Donuts that either of those two are the culprits!!

😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡!!

// WOW, what a colossal pile of shit!!!! PJ is a vile, repugnant, despicable, bigoted man!!! It’s been a super long time since I’ve truly wanted to reach through my Kindle and kick a character so hard in the family jewels, his balls pop out of his rancid mouth!!! I hate PJ with a perfect hate 😡!!

// WTF?!!? Kris gave Remi a blow-job and we’re only a getting a sort of ‘by the way, this happened’ kind of recap?!!? I’m annoyed!! I would have liked to read about this specific scene!!

// “I’m an idiot,” said Remi with a nervous laugh. The sudden break in tension shocked Kris. But before he could panic, Remi lifted up his hand between his own and held it to his chest. “Oh my god. You’ve been here the whole time. Like, literally forever.”

~ Okay NOT “literally forever”!! People, fictional and not, have to stop saying “literally” in reference to things that are NOT literal!!

// You know what, I changed my mind about my first update [ref: disliking the sneak peak]!! I REALLY like what this author did with the sneak peak and in this instance I don't feel as though it detracted at all, in fact, I feel like it added a delicious energy and sexy anticipation!! PLUS, I really like how the author handled it by giving us first Remi's and now Kris's POV where this specific scene is concerned :-D!!

// Holy moly, Kris, have a little self respect!! You could spit in any direction and get a job ANYWHERE!! Get the fuck out of there, tell PJ he can shove his homophobic bullshit AND his shitty job up his own ass 😡! Flip him the bird and get the fuck outta there!! You’re worried about losing your job when your boss just tried to crap all over you with his bigoted bullshit?!!? Blech!!! Good riddance to PJ!!

// HOLY FUCK!! Kris, just tell PJ to go fuck himself, though I’m thinking even HE wouldn’t fuck him 😡!! What a shit piece of work!!
I’m thinking this is a blessing in disguise and I think you should use your glorious ideas and open a LGBTQ bar YOURSELF 🙂!! I think you’d be far more successful and it would be far more amazing if YOU and Remi owned and operated it 😊!!