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is 32% done
There are a lot of flashbacks. At least the flashbacks seem natural. Not a ham handed attempt to explain. Still, not my favorite writing technique.
I like the story. At 1/3 through the story, I have no clue who murdered Luke & his family or even if it was someone other than Luke.
— Aug 27, 2018 04:06AM
I like the story. At 1/3 through the story, I have no clue who murdered Luke & his family or even if it was someone other than Luke.

