Rachel (aka Ms4Tune)’s Reviews > Pledged > Status Update

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Well it is getting better, I can't decide whether it was clever writing at the beginning, ie you feel as confused as the characters or whether I just didn't understand or it was all just a bit of a shambles. I'm going for a mix of a and b but possibly could have been c and its just improved enough for me to get into the story.

I have no clue what is going on. I find myself getting distracted by everything else. Ow look a moth, oh look there is a cobweb in the corner, oh yes I would love to do the dishes. Ugh please get better.

Meh, think this might be a pusher. So far it felt like I was just shoved in mid story and now the characters have to 'catch me up' with endless prose about why they are where they are... I will see how it goes.