Squire Whitney: Hufflepuff Book Reviwer’s Reviews > Meritropolis > Status Update
Squire Whitney: Hufflepuff Book Reviwer
is 57% done
A little over halfway done and so far this book strikes me as an early draft of what could have been a great dystopia. While the premise, plot, and themes are great, the story needs some major work in terms of writing and characterization.
— Sep 03, 2018 07:15PM
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Squire Whitney: Hufflepuff Book Reviwer
is 89% done
Okay, I had my fair share of problems with this book earlier, but the ending is becoming darn goooood!
— Sep 15, 2018 08:03PM
