Kris’s Reviews > Foundryside > Status Update

Pretty good, but a few too many references to modern/this world things (references to being "caffeinated", people saying "that's, like, something else" or "Oh my God!") - it tends to jar me out of the world the author created (which is definitely not Earth and definitely not modern). I've seen worse, but I didn't expect it from an author that is so lauded. The story is still good, though. So I'm still reading!