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Jhosy
is 4% done
THIS IS ALREADY SO FUCKING GOOD!
I wonder if it has magic and Leila is really the biologic daughter of Regina and Emma (´~`)
— Sep 16, 2018 04:57PM
I wonder if it has magic and Leila is really the biologic daughter of Regina and Emma (´~`)
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Jhosy
is 21% done
I don't know if I'll continue this. I'm trying but things are dragging and I'm not convinced that Leila wants to help Regina even when she still didn't handled her feelings about the foster care
— Sep 17, 2018 12:16PM
Jhosy
is 18% done
...she had called Regina's phone and now she suddenly hadn't call?
😑what is happening? Who revised it? Who let it pass? It's really sad see such good writing techniques and plot be wasted because it was badly revised and has a lot of errors
— Sep 17, 2018 11:22AM
😑what is happening? Who revised it? Who let it pass? It's really sad see such good writing techniques and plot be wasted because it was badly revised and has a lot of errors
Jhosy
is 17% done
The plot is really good but I'm getting tired of this long scenes. So many chapters with so many pages and time don't even pass. Also, its can be so confusing when a character decides something and 2 pages later changes her mind and then changes again 🙃
Without a doubt it would be perfect if someone had read and advised the author
— Sep 17, 2018 11:13AM
Without a doubt it would be perfect if someone had read and advised the author
Jhosy
is 8% done
Okay...I'm getting confused here. I hope that it will be explained later 🤔
— Sep 16, 2018 09:14PM

