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The only reason I’m still reading is:
1. I can say I read the whole book and it was awful.
2. I want to see if the character development improves, I seriously doubt it will though.
The thing that upsets me the most (besides the 7th grade writing skills) is the way Edward treats Bella and that she sees nothing wrong with it and “LOVES” him. They both have an unhealthy obsession.
— Sep 26, 2018 08:16AM
1. I can say I read the whole book and it was awful.
2. I want to see if the character development improves, I seriously doubt it will though.
The thing that upsets me the most (besides the 7th grade writing skills) is the way Edward treats Bella and that she sees nothing wrong with it and “LOVES” him. They both have an unhealthy obsession.
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Khali
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The only reason I’m still reading is:
1. I can say I read the whole book and it was awful.
2. I want to see if the character development improves, I seriously doubt it will though.
The thing that upsets me the most (besides the 7th grade writing skills) is the way Edward treats Bella and that she sees nothing wrong with it and “LOVES” him. They both have an unhealthy obsession.
— Sep 26, 2018 08:16AM
1. I can say I read the whole book and it was awful.
2. I want to see if the character development improves, I seriously doubt it will though.
The thing that upsets me the most (besides the 7th grade writing skills) is the way Edward treats Bella and that she sees nothing wrong with it and “LOVES” him. They both have an unhealthy obsession.
Khali
is on page 144 of 498
I’m going to be completely honest, I really don’t like Twilight. The writing quality is very poor, the character development is ill thought out, and parts of the book make no sense at all. I think I can write a better book. I have an idea of what makes people love Twilight and besides that ONE thing, I don’t like the book.
— Sep 25, 2018 08:29AM
