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I'm enjoying this very much, but I find the writing a little uneven - Frazier's attention to detail is wonderful. Not a paragraph goes by that doesn't paint a scenic picture in fine detail - but the big picture is a little hazy: What states did Inman travel through? What month is it? It keeps getting later in fall but winter doesn't arrive.
I also ran into one change of POV in a sentence.
— Oct 16, 2018 11:38AM
I also ran into one change of POV in a sentence.
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If the author had but skipped the needles "buts" and "yets" the book might have yet redeemed itself from sounding like a cheap imitation of Southern speech.
— Oct 18, 2018 06:11AM
