Elithanathile’s Reviews > Kindred Spirits > Status Update
Elithanathile
is finished
// I believe I've outgrown this author ... on the other hand though, I'm intrigued by what she might come up with next!! Thing is, her stories are so over-the-top, so implausible, so nonsensical, and also ... incredibly lacking, not only in a much needed POV of the 2nd MC, but also the sex scenes themselves (which are glossed over in such a way that I think she invented an even worse alternative to fade-to-black)!!!
— Oct 16, 2018 11:48PM
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Elithanathile
is 5% done
// If the guy is in his early 20s, that would make him a young MAN!! The fact that he's referred to as a BOY is a little odd to me and I find it curious that the author refers to him as such!! He's a MAN not a boy; to say "boy" implies he's MUCH younger and I immediately think of someone in his teens at maximum!!! Peculiar phrasing!!!
— Oct 15, 2018 10:46PM
