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Carey
is 18% done
The story is good, the characters engaging BUT OH DEAR LORD IS IT IN NEED OF EDITING!! Is it Friday or Saturday night? Did grandma move to Arizona or Florida? HOLY HELL PEOPLE, THE DETAILS MATTER! ( unless your goal is to yank me out of the story. If so, carry on).
— Oct 21, 2018 03:18PM
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Carey
is 53% done
EDITY. If Dmitri is on top, he can’t reach down and kiss himself. Unless he’s double-jointed and very flexible 🙄
— Oct 21, 2018 06:11PM
