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It has started to become less childish ... Less meaningless passages, they are there still, but there's an improvement! can't wait to finish this one!
— Nov 07, 2018 09:16AM
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I think you should ... these books need a lot of editing to remove many (many!) unnecessary passages in my opinion ... but it's still fun to read :D



consider giving it a new shot. You like it?