Elithanathile’s Reviews > Too Close to Love > Status Update

// Not crazy about the fact that this story ended at 93%, especially since this book was already split into 4 mini books :-/!! But what a story it was regardless!! On to the next :-)!!

// Okay, everything is glorious and sexy and hot and wonderful ... UNTIL the author used the dreaded “tits” during their lovemaking session!! No, no, no, NO!! Don’t do it!! Authors, STOP using that word in an MM book 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡!!

// This author is doing a PHENOMENAL job writing this story :-)!! Really really REALLY enjoying this so far :-)!! I’m glad I own all the other books in the series :-)!!

// Holy moly, that was SO damn sexy <3 <3 <3 !!

// I totally get it :-)!! The author approaches it this was to make it as "normalized" and as just one more way to express a beautiful, magnificent, true, pure, innocent, wonderful, long lasting, committed love story between two people who love one another beyond words :-)!!!

// I know what the author approached the concept of kind of hinting at a license professional know what's going on with Kevin & Jeremy, and that was to "normalize" what they are doing, to make it OKAY that they're in love, to make it come across as them NOT doing anything wrong (and here, in this BOOK, they most definitely aren't), to make it seem as good and pure and true and innocent and beautiful as possible :-)!!

// “My dick was pressed against the back of the zipper on my pants, and if something didn’t happen soon, I was going to have teeth marks—and not the good kind—on my cock by the time it calmed down again.”

~ Ummmm, author, you need to dial it down a bit so you can think clearly!! Since when are ANY teeth marks on a dick a good thing??!!

// “He smiled a naughty grin and seemed to find the courage to say what he’d probably been too embarrassed to say before. “When you bent over and I saw your ass…” There was a pause while he made me wait, and this time, I could see on his face that he was teasing me. “And I saw that little hole peeking out. Flashing me that long, thick cock and your ass. God, I wanted to touch you. Everywhere.”

~ RAWRRR!!

// It's been a long time since the sexual tension and buildup were SO palpable and SO strong, that I wanted the MCs to rip each others friggin' clothes off already :-D!!!! Come on, guys, blue-ball yourselves a little bit longer, go home, pack all your shit, get the hell outta Dodge, disappear into your new lives [that DON'T include your despicable 'rents], and THEN you can get to the magnificent fucking/loving :-P!!!

// I really hope the author throws a shit ton of retribution at Kevin and Jeremy's parents!!!!! I want them to get the fuck out of their sons lives, and I want them to spend their lives in jail for what they tried to do to Kevin and Jeremy!!! What nasty, repulsive, horrible, despicable parents >:-o!!!!!!

I hope nothing tears Jeremy and Kevin apart :-)!!