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// Holy shit there is SO much sex here; I’m starting to skim and roll my eyes!! There’s also almost ZERO plot!! What was the point of making them firefighters?!!? They might as well be gas station attendants for all we see of them in their jobs!! And the little “plot” we DO see, involves a meddling ex-girlfriend and this author wrongfully portraying bisexuality and making it look REALLY bad!!!
— Nov 11, 2018 11:38PM

