Regina’s Reviews > A McClendon Thanksgiving > Status Update
Regina
is 58% done
This author needs to take a writing class. What's the point of where the plot is right now? At this point there should be some rising tension, something at stake. I feel like I could put this book down without finishing it.
— Nov 12, 2018 06:30PM
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Regina
is 67% done
This story is failing. Instead of characters acting like adults, they are acting like starry-eyed children. Mike is talking about marrying Faith to everyone except Faith. So when this book could have illustrated a mature conversation about marriage, it fails!
— Nov 14, 2018 03:58AM
Regina
is 28% done
This writer has potential, but this "turkey" isn't fully cooked. The writing is very poorly done. She's making a good try, but it is getting tiresome to read because of the poor writing (poor vocabulary, poor dialogue, too many adjectives).
— Nov 12, 2018 12:48PM
