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Heather
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So far, I'm finding this story leaves much to be desired. The general premise of the book is cool, but the characters are not deep. It's hard to read when every sentence each character says the others' name. I'm hoping it will get better as the story progresses
— Nov 04, 2012 05:34PM
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Heather
is on page 70 of 112
Wrong uses of "your" and "you're" are disappointing in a finished book. Also, I'm not sure I understand why all the plants are dying in 3 days without sun? That is unrealistic. I wanted to like this book, I really did, but so far it is falling flat for me and I believe in giving honest reviews.
— Nov 04, 2012 05:37PM