Anne Oftedahl’s Reviews > Descent of Shadows > Status Update
Anne Oftedahl
is 5% done
Just finished chapter 1. I'm intrigued, but I feel like parts of it are a bit clumsily written...
— Nov 18, 2018 08:51AM
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Anne Oftedahl
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I was pretty much laughing throughout the entirety of chapter 15 - kids outsmarting the "experienced grown-ups" is always funny AF
— Nov 19, 2018 05:54PM
Anne Oftedahl
is 36% done
Why would Anna take weapons from the armoury when she knows they don't have that much and she already has two wraith daggers? That's just not very smart...
— Nov 19, 2018 05:27PM
Anne Oftedahl
is 33% done
I'm sorry, who the fuck is Jonathan? You can't just introduce a character that the MC apparently knows without giving us any information except his name
— Nov 18, 2018 10:34AM
Anne Oftedahl
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Uhh.... I'm confused... Is Roland not the main villain? Is there someone worse than him? I don't get it.
— Nov 18, 2018 09:44AM
Anne Oftedahl
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...really?
Both Alex and Anna have gone through traumatic experiences very recently, but they don't act like it at all. The ease with which they talk to each other is pretty unrealistic.
— Nov 18, 2018 09:06AM
Both Alex and Anna have gone through traumatic experiences very recently, but they don't act like it at all. The ease with which they talk to each other is pretty unrealistic.
