Lyuba’s Reviews > The Unlikely Gift of Treasure Blume > Status Update

And now a woman is being compared to a car.

Jumps from one point of view of another

Quit referring to the job title as 'lunch lady'. You're a guy, do you're lunch person or lunch man.

And now there is Thankful. Honestly I would be pissed if my parents named me that.

Actually it also rubs me the wrong way that all the women have strange names like Treasure and Patience and Experience but men get normal names like Randy and Bud.

Not a very good flow, feels very abrupt.