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“She lifted a pair of thin, wrinkled hands and kissed his face. “Bentornata a casa, tesoro."
Welcome home, darling. Said with such ease, such warmth. Family. He wanted that.”
. PLEASE WRITERS let a native speaker check your books before using another language. HE was happy to be home. HE was happy his grandmother is saying 'welcome'. HE not SHE! BentornatO. Bentornata should be used to a woman!
Nov 12, 2012 10:20PM
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