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I'm just skimming at this point and hoping this will end soon.

Wtf, I can't do anything but laugh at this point. The MC just lit a guy's finger on fire, he got mad, and the other people present were just like, "That’s just how she is Leonardo. Be a man and suck it up."

I feel like I need to make a PSA because I'm sick of seeing this even in otherwise well-written books (which this is not): "LED" is the past tense of the verb "lead." When "lead" is pronounced as "led," it is a noun rather than a verb. Stop saying things like "he lead me to the store yesterday."

This really isn't good. I doubt I'll make it far in this one.

Awful dialogue: "It was brilliant hahaha."