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Tina
is 47% done
Then we the reader knew that Shi caught Spin with Clair. We knew from Spin that he was doing the maid Terri. So when did Shi find out? Per Janell she was fired and now needs a replacement? It’s the little things like continuity that’s lacking here.
— Dec 29, 2018 04:13AM
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Tina
is 47% done
The third book is confusing but I’m determined to get to the end. The proofreading and editing is still non-existent. The author speaks canine, referring to teeth as k9s. That’s the kind of issues being dealt with here.
— Dec 29, 2018 04:13AM
