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Monica
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Finished chapter 1. I was excitedto start the book, ready for all the oversharing, but the story seems all over the place. One liner comedy over storyline, therefore making it less funny and more hard work than it needed to be. However Rosie seems to save the chapter! She stories flow, her comedy sticks, her stories shock! Rosie seems to be the real writer in this couple!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
— Jan 01, 2019 02:46AM
Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Monica
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Finished chapter 2, found a couple typos. But both are getting into the stride of writing now!
— Jan 01, 2019 05:45AM
Monica
is on page 38 of 256
Finished chapter 1. I was excitedto start the book, ready for all the oversharing, but the story seems all over the place. One liner comedy over storyline, therefore making it less funny and more hard work than it needed to be. However Rosie seems to save the chapter! She stories flow, her comedy sticks, her stories shock! Rosie seems to be the real writer in this couple!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
— Jan 01, 2019 05:43AM
Can't wait for the next chapter!
