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How about bad grammar and unreadability? For example:
"That was great. Only seen the tree do that a few times." Mike grinned.
"Sure was pretty inside. Did you see all the flowers?"
"Yeah, notice it looked bigger inside than out?"
And while I'm here, I might as well mention the overuse of the period? The author needs to learn some new punctuation. There is practically no expression and emotion! Ugh!!!
— Jan 05, 2019 10:31AM
"That was great. Only seen the tree do that a few times." Mike grinned.
"Sure was pretty inside. Did you see all the flowers?"
"Yeah, notice it looked bigger inside than out?"
And while I'm here, I might as well mention the overuse of the period? The author needs to learn some new punctuation. There is practically no expression and emotion! Ugh!!!
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