Danii Allen’s Reviews > Throwing Stones > Status Update
Danii Allen
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I'm not complaining about the development, but if that was supposed to be a plot twist I figured it out sixty pages ago.
— Jan 17, 2019 06:03AM
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Danii Allen
is on page 265 of 398
I think my biggest problem with this book is that it doesn't really feel like a story? It's just like someone narrating their life, including a lot of the boring superfluous bits that don't really need to be there. I don't like the past-tense 'retelling' style it's written in either, and I don't think that helps with the over-complicatedness of it. Plus I can't connect to Ronan's character at all.
— Jan 23, 2019 06:13PM
Danii Allen
is on page 209 of 398
This book needs to dial back the OMG and WTFs, they're grating on me. Although I do feel like I'm being excessively harsh, because I am enjoying the story, I just wish it had been properly edited.
— Jan 17, 2019 02:17PM
Danii Allen
is on page 167 of 398
I. Really. Wish. This. Book. Had. An. Editor.
— Jan 16, 2019 05:33PM
Danii Allen
is on page 135 of 398
This book would have seriously benefited from an editor.
— Jan 16, 2019 09:29AM
Danii Allen
is on page 87 of 398
I like the premise of this book (I always love queer shit + religion) but the writing doesn't feel at all polished, which makes it somewhat hard to read. I'm hoping I get more into it as I keep reading.
— Jan 15, 2019 03:14PM
