Selena Pigoni’s Reviews > Ocean of Secrets, Volume 1 > Status Update
Selena Pigoni
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Oh man, this art... It's like Deviantart in the mid-2000s. Already we have the stiffest running scene I have seen in some time, odd profiles, and a strangely drawn expression.
The stills (the cover and the table of contents) look fine, but it strikes me that when motion gets involved, things get... stilted.
— Jan 20, 2019 02:18PM
The stills (the cover and the table of contents) look fine, but it strikes me that when motion gets involved, things get... stilted.
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Selena Pigoni
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So... much... talking. Why must the world building be just info dumps? And forced exposition. 20 pages of it in fact. A full chapter.
— Jan 20, 2019 02:36PM
So... much... talking. Why must the world building be just info dumps? And forced exposition. 20 pages of it in fact. A full chapter.
