boudour’s Reviews > Wundersmith: The Calling of Morrigan Crow > Status Update
boudour
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Nooooo, of all people to have hold the idiot ball :( Jupiter *said* he'd look into it! Why wouldn't he?!
Granted there always needs to be a measure of ~incompetence etc... from the adults in middle grade books to allow for the kids to go on adventures but that was too much. There's also not enough of him as a *character* vs as a mentor figure. You're doing Jupiter North dirty, book, me no likey.
— Jan 31, 2019 09:47AM
Granted there always needs to be a measure of ~incompetence etc... from the adults in middle grade books to allow for the kids to go on adventures but that was too much. There's also not enough of him as a *character* vs as a mentor figure. You're doing Jupiter North dirty, book, me no likey.
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I hate it when the plot hinges on people who should be sharing information (tentative allies, friends...) not communicating. Even when it's reasonably justified in-universe and isn't a lazy writing shortcut it just hurts my heart, sometimes also in good ways, but mostly in "WHY WON'T YOU ALL GET ALONG ALREADY AND BE FRIENDS! DD:" ways.
— Jan 30, 2019 05:46PM
